Analysis story "Powder" by Esther Castaneda and Elizabeth Toguchi Erotica and stream of consciousness in "Dust" by Jennifer Thorndike
Let me sing to you like when you were mine,
wild sister, and when we climbed
the star that went to sleep from our eyes solitudes
distilled love.
Julia de Burgos
I dreamed mighty, formidable and passionate;
spoke the imprecise language of the torrent was a sea overflowed
madness and fire,
rolling through life like a perennial irrigation.
Delmira Agustini
says the story conventionally in general is a short story, oral or written and are designed to produce a single effect the reader. Review "Dust" by Jennifer Thorndike, because after reading his first book, Z chromosome expect another fever and intuitive speech, we were not disappointed, although we do not like the topic of domestic violence against woman inserts in "Dust", say it is a story deftly worked based on the ambiguity of his speech. Mimics a winding monologue that follows the mood swings of the main character and this imitative writing back to the suspense of the old black and white films that thought forgotten, because that is, to a demand for affection as response has been postponed. Throughout the story, we are looking forward and that's what characterizes 'Dust' defuse this rarefied atmosphere, so thick you could cut, tight as a violin string, magic is the fusion of crisis and change , pending a final sensed from the first words.
Jennifer Thorndike's Tale is preceded by two cultural markers that contain some of keys sense, we refer on the one hand the title, "Dust" and other verses from the song "The Fool" of the Cuban singer Silvio Rodriguez now established as an epigraph. Regarding the title, Dictionary of the Royal Academy has among its meanings, as follows: Del lat. pulvus by pulvi. 1. m. Broken part of the fine and very dry, with any movement up in the air. 2. m. The residue remaining from other solid things, grinding them to reduce them to very tiny parts. 3. m. Tiny portion of any thing or reduced to powder, which can be taken all at once with the tips of the thumb and forefinger. 4. m. In the language of the drug, heroin 2. 5. m. Solid particles floating in the air and settle on objects. 6. m. coloq. vulg. intercourse. Browse dust. 7. m. pl. Different colored cosmetic product that is used for makeup.
For us "dust" is a term in the story has several meanings within them fits both the first and the sixth sense, on the one hand, indicate the name of the solid particles with a diameter less than 500 micrometers, it is the house dust , office or house dust and this dust referred to in the beginning: "I have never ceased to accumulate even the thin film of dust on my furniture, my ornaments and less on my parquet floor." And second, the story is tinged with a strong sensuality, also points to the sixth sense, we refer to sexual intercourse or sexual relationship. While not explicitly referred to the relationship between the two women listed as moments and sexual union as part of moldable material that has the power, mixing old and recent memories, opening a space of possibilities. She joins characters, living standards, becoming the relationship was only the start obsessively between the two in a relationship aggressive and tender (from dominant to dominant).
The presence of a fragment of the verses of the song "The Fool" in the narrative structure, has made these words are a key to the story, the counterpoint to this piece was culled (5 stanza vv 29-32) for a total of six stanzas with 36 vv and place it in the front of her story, making it appear as a kind of porch. Then moved the political tension p ersonal surrounding the song to a more individual power. Highlighted in the snippet, two concepts: persistence and now, the first, repeatedly expressed in the word "folly" with her and second, present in the word 'bare' and 'today. " Finally, we take as the consolidation of a time that is sinking into the past to bail decisions and memories. We know the political level that contextualizes the lyrics of Silvio Rodriguez and he said: "When I wrote" The Fool ", was thinking of Fidel and, until some extent, on me. All my songs have inevitably a strong dose of my personal experiences. But in this case, which led me to write was the ideological climate of the late 80's early 90 [...]. Somehow, I counted the revolution that was going down the Soviet Union and the wishes of ours. " What is risky is talking narrative counterpoint that the author has chosen to achieve that effect of contrast and reaction, not only spatially and visually moving this piece of "The Fool" to "Dust" but has also moved blood. If, for example, the song appears in the verse "the folly of living without money" figure in the story: "So I wanted because I had nobody and your need was greater than your pride, right?." In both there is an allusion to the law of the market: supply and demand, both the opposition between two ways of living, both agree on the final decision. Thorndike has moved deftly personal political tension to a more social and individual stress, which achieves a distancing sui generis .
The structure of the story takes a spiral in which the actions and memories are intertwined, and are given impulses for a comprehensive search, feverish and unique, perhaps these actions are irrational and therefore is absurd that "Dust." We are in the world of feelings, no doubt, and before the breakup of a relationship of domination and possession, anything is possible. Is it the plot, a love story? How is a story of love? Usually follows a time sequence from beginning to end or alter these conventional brands. A topic in literature is to describe the sequential or logical order of actions in relationships. (Home + solution to the obstacle 1 and 2, ending in a happy ending.). Regarding the order, the petitioner makes no distinctions in the story is a beginning, obstacles (tacitly saved) and an end, despite the troubled nature of this relationship of love and need between two women, their levels of consciousness handled the complexity of memory and fantasy to depict feelings and emotions, is similar to his characterization Lula Carson Smith better known as Carson McCullers in Clock without hands.
affective relationship breaks into the lives of the characters and the description of small details we realize the beginnings and ends of this story, in general, symptoms from the couple survives or sinks. Are due to 'changes', 'transformation', 'modification' or whatever the feedback from the strange feelings and feedback is the atmosphere made in "Dust." "I realized that something had changed since that day you walked barefoot from the front door to the chair and felt the rough soles of my feet." So begins "Dust" and the address a second person in a free indirect discourse, noting changes point to the latest twist in a love relationship.
Thorndike In writing, there is work over time and it is expressed in varying envelopes, several times before the beginning of the story that extends over the protagonist as soapy water. Similarly, possessive as "my furniture", "my ornaments," "my parquet floor ',' my books', point to a social composition and adaptation to economic power, which is explicit and stifling repetition. That is one of the achievements of the story, creating a stifling atmosphere, possessive and repetitive, for it Thorndike founded an emotional space, with point of view of a character does not matter which is not the most attractive, it does not matter, what matters is to convince, -to convince us, "because although the interior monologue is a technique narrative through which he reveals the most intimate, special and appealing about it is make it look non-fiction, read credible representation of the "discourse" and this interior is a work of narrative gold.
Thorndike mentioned some concepts that are links to other actions, the focus and makes them more dense and emphatic "You've never left ',' Security had decided to ignore those patriarchal impositions forced you to learn and follow. " Finally, as a Chinese box structure is never ending but the significant burden of the story speaks well. It is not just inspiration but work. There are 15 chores and / or knowledge in the socialization of this woman, "cleaning, cooking, shopping, doing laundry, do not touch my books, do not turn on the TV unless it was to watch shows that make you think too much, ask to go out, talk, think, be quiet when I speak, shut up if you do not speak, out together, get to the exact time, kneel down like a bitch and spread her legs whenever I want. "
The idea that a relationship between two women that make this story should add a different perspective to the story. Perhaps a more sophisticated eroticism, but it is not, because it repeats and reproduces violence and machismo. In this 'couple' is a supplier and a person subject, there is a person who has the economic and psychological power. We are concerned about a patriarchal model, male, conservative, gender relationship. It is a tradition that a supplier is a man or woman who takes that role everything is allowed, provided they comply and continue with its role of provider (a) includes violence legislation because the vendor everything is allowed, the character that makes couples only touches submit.
We want to emphasize how eroticism is presented, if earlier times women were identified with nature and imagined femininity in his role enigmatic and violent eroticism now how hard it is vital that surrounds women, they communicate through it, taking in changing the way conducive to destroy what is being built. The imagery of a seductive and devouring femininity while the other associated with the weakness is also a target of Jennifer Thorndike, with photo of mother and the encounter with the other, we as compared to a gallery of women characters.
Finally, the monologue typifies the protagonist, and the Peruvian literature gives examples of some of the Peruvian narrative works written by women that use this technique to emphasize the atmosphere or the main character , as follows: Blanca Sol of Moquegua, Mercedes Cabello; Indómita of Lima, Angelica Palma; The trick of the eye and Ximena two-way cerreña of Laura Riesco, also in Ranchos cane and Shadows and rumors of Ica and Gaby María Rosa Macedo Cevasco, respectively, etc. As in Mrs. Dalloway Virginia Woolf , they use interior monologue to characterize this fusion of the real world and the inner world. And finally we are to "dust" of Jennifer Thorndike a text immersed in the world of speculation, imagination, in short, the association of febrile times, confusing truth and fiction and the face of insecurity and tension of this strange relationship, this story raises the need for more models and a redefinition of family roles.
Esther Castaneda and Elizabeth Toguchi *
* Esther Elizabeth Castaneda and Toguchi, researchers and publishers.
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